Teacher feedback

Your mood board is good at communicating your chosen genre but something that communicates your intended visual style is needed.
Some clips of films that influence you and an explanation as to the specific things that influence your idea is needed.
Also, the idea you have is influenced by a crime caper with an ensemble cast but your chosen scenario is an adventure film with a young audience, how are you going to combine the two?

Good work so far, after the pitch you need to start drawing your storyboard and write up a fill shot list on the blog.