Thursday 5 March 2009

Evalutation feedback

Mise en scene
Choice of props is good for the genre.
The character is random and is hard to relate to the genre.

Camera work
Couldn't see most of the names in the titles because of the speed.
No camera work

Editing
The character popping up is random, may look better without it.
Some of the titles are hard to see, the pace is a bit to quick.
There isn't any moving image footage.
Looks very professional

Sounds
Quite repetitive after a while
Good start of track, but feels like it should go
onto another beat instead of staying with guitar.
First track fades into second track clashes.

Generic Conventions:
No pictures of group, doesn't look like an adventure film.
Good sense of travel by using the animation.

Level 1

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